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Thursday, August 6, 2020

Pirate needed

Hey Readers,
Here is my writing, this term we are focusing on pirates. Are you interested in pirates? Enjoy:)

PIRATE NEEDED 



Do ya want to sail the seven seas? 

Would ya like to be the captain? 

or would ya like to try the boatswain?


 Well heres the perfect job. If you accept my offer you will be cleaning and sharpening the weapons. You will need to buy weapons for us and sharpen them because we said so.

if you do a good job you will get a free pass to the shower after a battle if ya dont mind theres no towels we wont look i promise.

And also if you don't mind that there’s nothing to wipe ya butt with and you’ll have no toothbrushes.

We love to kill humans if you don't like it get use to it mate. And you will need too dress like a pirate talk like a pirate. You will also get 6% of the treasures we find and you will get to sharpen our opponents swords. 


Contact us at 157 green home street 

phone number 027 174 8462 



     




   

3 comments:

  1. Hi Preston
    A really good post but can you Not! go that far with the shower,
    But everything else is good.
    If i was a pirate i will Not! be sharping swords for hour's.
    You done very well Preston.
    Preston I've got one question for you will you work for me?

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  2. hey preston
    I would really like to join your crew though I would like something to wipe my butt with but other then that i would love to join your crew as i get 6%
    of the treasure.
    Noah

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  3. Hi Preston, It’s Tiffany
    I like how you put The phone number and address. It was pretty funny. Especially the part about getting a free pass to the shower. When I read your blogpost I learnt that pirates can be really silly. To improve your blogpost you could try and add more details about what the pirate does. Where did you get the ideas from?
    Tiffany

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